Chapter 8: Talking with Others about Your Writing

Because writing is a form of communication, it is widely regarded as a social process, one that is iterative, and that to be effective, benefits from an interactive process. This means that there is a continual refinement process between stages, where attention to audience and purpose are a crucial part of the process (and not something to avoid, or a sign of failure). Like many other skills, feedback is essential to progress from novice to expert. Throughout UN 1015, there will be structured opportunities to receive and give feedback throughout multiple stages of the writing process.

Peer Review

Many students have had experience in their previous education with different types of reader feedback configurations. In this section, we distinguish between different types of peer reading and response activities.

Peer Review

As we have distinguished in Chapter 4, composition scholars note that writing processes take place in multiple stages, usually iterative and recursive (meaning they take place multiple times, sometimes the same activity in a single text). “Peer review” or “peer revising” focus on higher order concerns—for example, the organization of the piece; the effectiveness of the content; and how and whether the text meets the needs of the reader/audience and fulfills the purpose of the writing task. In peer review, readers are focused on the text and their experience of it as readers: does it fulfill the expectations for the writing task?

Peer Editing

Peer editing would be appropriate at the stage that a piece is being finalized for submission or a later stage of review. In a recursive writing process, it doesn’t make sense to focus on correcting sentence-level issues (style) or lower-order concerns like punctuation and mechanics in earlier stages like peer review. Editing before revision would be like painting a room before you’ve finished putting up the walls. Hence, it would be sort of like painting all the pieces of a machine before you know which pieces will even be part of the final creation. Editing should be reserved for later stages of a process. This is where you are concerned with proofreading your peer’s document to polish it for publication.

Strategies for Effective Peer Review

Becoming a confident writer also requires becoming a confident reader. The effectiveness of review is directly related to the reading and writing skills you are able to draw upon while you engage with a text and its writer. In this section, we provide strategies and tools that lead to effective peer review sessions.

For each peer review session, you should complete or update an author’s note—these are “meta-documents” where you “pull back the curtain,” so to speak, on the processes you used to complete the text and where you engage in an assessment of your progress on this literacy task. In this context, “meta” means referring back to itself. So, an author’s note is a meta-document that refers back to the document you’ve written. Writing an author’s note can help you develop metacognitive knowledge. It’s important to note that metacognitive knowledge is made up of two components, as discussed in the Handbook of College Reading and Study Strategies:

"Vacca and Vacca (1994) proposed that deep processing of complex material requires two types of knowledge. Metacognitive knowledge, or 'the ability to think about or control your own learning' (p. 47) is one type. Metacognitive knowledge, in turn includes self-knowledge and task knowledge. Self-knowledge is the knowledge students have about themselves as learners. Task knowledge is knowledge about available skills and strategies. Formative assessment also involves self-regulation, or 'the ability to monitor and regulate comprehension."

Author’s notes are a structured opportunity for you to practice this kind of cognitive work, expressing what you have learned (or already know) about yourself as a writer, as well as what specific strategies you have used in completing this specific writing task.

Your author’s note will include the following elements:

  • The process you followed in preparing the document (how did you go about writing it)
  • The stage of development (where are you at in the writing process, what have you accomplished and what do you need to do yet)
  • Assessment of areas that are working well and those that you are continuing to develop (what are you proud of, what needs more work)
  • Any barriers or roadblocks you have experienced (if relevant--these can be small or large challenges)
  • Requests for specific kinds of feedback, for example, to help you move past a barrier or roadblock.
  • If you used a Generative AI tool like ChatGPT, write about the purpose for which you used it, at which stage, and how it is reflected in this current draft.

Author’s Notes Recommendations

  1. Be specific: “I struggled when trying to compare my two sources in relation to the genre. What do you think about my comparison on page 2?”
  2. Reflect on and connect to your process: “The hardest thing for me to draft was the concluding paragraph. Do you have any additional ideas for how I can improve what I have?”
  3. Identify what you think is working well: “I had a brainstorm when connecting the rhetorical strategies used in the twitter thread with the scholarly article. How do you think that is working?”
  4. Ask for help with what’s not there: “I want to talk about the differences in the visual aspects of the two pieces, but I’m not sure how to start—do you have ideas?”
  5. Clarify your understanding: “I think that I have accurately discussed the kind of evidence that each of the texts use, but I’m not sure—what is your view?

Peer review is most effective when the following conditions are in place:

  1. Writers compose an author's note (a self-assessment in a few sentences of what they think is working about their draft and what they feel like they would like to continue to revise)
  2. All members have a copy of the document to look at as the writer reads it (paper or electronic)
  3. Writers read their draft out loud (this is a strategy that is effective at identifying issues with clarity, coherence, and correctness)
  4. Readers focus on specific questions and feedback is formative (for use by the writer to help them in their writing process)
  5. Writers reflect on their conversation afterwards in writing

Your section instructor may use variations on this process for the purposes of getting reader feedback from classmates.

Conferencing with Your Instructor

Individual meetings (or conferences) with your writing instructor is a core practice in composition pedagogy, based on decades of research in the field that demonstrates writers benefit from individualized feedback (in multiple ways)—from talking about their writing process and their thinking, to interacting with readers about their goals and purpose in the text. This section makes recommendations for how to make the most of your instructor conference and what typically takes place during a conference.

Prior to the Conference

Before your conference meeting, your instructor will provide a way for you to schedule a meeting time, either through a Google document, a form, spreadsheet, or other scheduling tool. Prior to the conference, make sure you understand what the scope and focus of the meeting will be. For example, your instructor might ask you to complete a pre-conference planning worksheet, generate goals and questions, or do some other preparatory work.

During the Conference

It is recommended that you have a way to take notes, either on a device or in a notebook, where you can keep a record of the conversation, including any suggestions or feedback you receive from your instructor. You might also have any prepared questions that you hope to discuss with your instructor. A conference is a great opportunity to clarify your understanding of expectations for an assignment or activity in the course, as well as any larger questions you have about your work in college.

After the Conference

It’s a good idea after the conference meeting to make any notes to yourself about what you will do next with the assignment/writing task you discussed with your instructor. This might include a work plan, concept map, revision list, or other documentation of the outcome of the meeting.

Modalities: Your instructor may require conferences that are in-person, online via Zoom, or offer you a choice of modality. If you are meeting online with Zoom, please be in a quiet location where you can have your camera on and interact with your instructor. In person, you will meet with your instructor in a public location on campus, likely your instructor's office, a conference room, or your regular classroom.

Some Common Student Concerns

  1. I’m nervous to talk to my professor/it is stressful to talk with faculty: It is not unusual to feel this way! Meeting with someone unfamiliar and in a position of authority can be intimidating. The important thing to remember is that your instructor is here to help you achieve the course goals and learning outcomes, and individual conversations are a great way to do that. UN 1015 is just one of the first opportunities that you will have to interact with faculty and will give you useful practice at talking with faculty.
  2. I’m a good writer and don’t need any help: In the writing studies book Naming What We Know, one of the key concepts that the authors introduce is “All Writers Have More to Learn” (Rose). This concept is central to writing studies because two things are simultaneously true: 1) you will often write in context and genres that are familiar and have usual conventions, and 2) every new writing situation calls for an evaluation of the context, purpose, and audience. What this means is that even confident and successful writers will encounter new situations that require them to adapt. Your instructor can help you identify your strengths and areas for continued improvement.
  3. I’m afraid of getting negative feedback: Receiving feedback that is critical or that identifies areas for improvement can be hard to process! Your instructor is trained in providing feedback to students and will always seek to be constructive and helpful. It is a universal truth that students at every level of learning will need to receive feedback in order to grow and develop. Learning how to receive, evaluate, and implement feedback is a major outcome of a university education.

Using the Writing Center

You should use the Writing Center often throughout your many courses at Michigan Tech. Contrary to many students’ beliefs about writing centers, ours is not just for students who are struggling with their writing in obvious ways. Any student can make an appointment to come in for any writing they might be doing, at any stage of the writing process, and regardless of where they are at in their own writing journey. Whether you’re coming in with just some notes and an assignment sheet, a rough draft, or you have a close-to-complete draft, the Writing Center staff and peer-to-peer coaches are there to offer friendly advice, a second set of eyes, writing expertise for fine-tuning your work, and will help you consider which next steps might help you better meet your writing goals.

Our Writing Center peer-to-peer coaches come from a broad range of majors—Biomedical Engineering to Geophysics to Theater Tech—and all receive comprehensive training to provide you with positive, judgment-free, and practical feedback on your written work. From papers to lab reports to resumes to presentations, if you’re writing something for a class, the Writing Center is here to help you do your best.

7 easy tricks to help ensure your Writing Center visit is successful:

  1. Plan ahead. Look at your syllabi for the semester and see when you have assignments due. Writing is time consuming and you can’t put it off until the last minute.
  2. Reserve an appointment at least several days before your deadlines. Walk-ins are always welcome, but are also kind of a gamble—what if you walk in on a particularly busy day and have to wait for an hour; what if you can’t get a walk-in appointment at all and your deadline is the next day?
  3. Come prepared. You should plan to bring your assignment details and a draft, outline, or some ideas for what you would like to work on during your session.
  4. Be open to feedback and ready to respond. Your coach will ask you what your goals are or if you have anything you particularly want to focus on. They will then read what you have and ask you questions or for clarifications. They will also make suggestions or note patterns in your writing. You will leave your session with ideas for what to do next on your own.
  5. Revise and Repeat! If you have time, you can bring the same assignment back to the same coach (or a different one) for another session after making revisions. Many students find having multiple appointments for the same document helpful. If not, you’ll know what to expect next time and can plan to incorporate the Writing Center into your writing process.
  6. Reserve regular appointments throughout the semester. Regular appointments can help you stay on task, create positive accountability, and are very effective at helping to manage procrastination.
  7. Work in the Writing Center on your own time. You don’t have to have an appointment or work with a peer-to-peer writing coach to use your Writing Center. Maybe you’re just looking for a quiet, cozy place to compose and work on your writing, one with easy access to writing resources and professionals who can lend a hand if you need it—the Writing Center is here for that, too!

Center Information

  • Location: 107 Walker
  • Hours: Monday–Friday, 10:00 am–5:00 pm, both online and in-person, synchronous and asynchronous. They offer some summer availability remotely. Check the Writing Center website for up-to-date details.
  • Appointments: Visit the Writing Center website and click the yellow button—“Make An Appointment”—on the home page, or walk-in during open hours.
  • Need additional support? Email writingcenter@mtu.edu with questions, and be sure to look through the Writing Center website for additional support on references and citations, writing tools, and other center information.

Using Generative AI Tools

GAI (generative artificial intelligence; sometimes referred to as Large Language Models, or LLMs) are tools like ChatGPT 3.5 and ChatGPT 4o, Claude, Gemini, and other programs that can generate text. Their texts are mechanically and grammatically correct, and can even fulfill some of the expectations of readers in a variety of contexts. Ethical and responsible use of these tools is an ongoing conversation among scholars, but there is relatively universal agreement that the use of these tools should be disclosed to readers and attributed. However, GAI can be used as part of the writing process in a variety of ways that can help writers without verging on academic misconduct/plagiarism. Some uses of GAI:

Planning and Invention

For many writers, getting started is the biggest challenge. GAI can be prompted to engage in a conversation that can help you work through your thinking. For example:

  • Prompt GAI to help you develop research questions, narrow and focus existing questions, or add alternative perspectives to your thinking.
  • Ask GAI to identify misconceptions, major scholars, or publications about your topic.
  • Engage in a dialogue with GAI: “What are additional questions, issues, or topics someone else might ask about my thesis statement, ______”?

Organizing Ideas

When faced with a large project, GAI can provide support in organizing your thinking and presenting your content. For example, a prompt that includes the writer providing a paragraph summary of the key points, goals, purpose, and genre in a GAI tool could be, “What are some ways I could organize these ideas in an essay?” Prompting with more specifics like specifying length, type of text, or reading level can produce additional results.

Developing Your Ideas

Have you ever heard feedback from a reader that you need to “say more” or “develop your points”? For writers, this can be challenging when they feel like they have said all there is to say. Here are some ways GAI can help with this:

  • Enter in a topic sentence or paragraph and ask GAI about additional points or examples.
  • Include a source that you are referencing and ask GAI to identify additional questions it raises or potential responses.
  • Input body paragraphs and ask GAI to generate objections or counterexamples.

Citing Sources

GAI is not a citation generator. (Those are readily available in many formats, like EasyBiIb or Citation Machine, and built into many databases and word processing programs.) However, it can help writers format their bibliographic entries.

  • The typical free version of GAI does not access the internet, so users need to provide the bibliographic information about a source to use a prompt like “Format this as an APA style references page entry.”
  • Ask GAI to show you a sample works cited entry in a particular style, then explain how to determine which bibliographic elements go where.
  • A common issue that students encounter is how to cite an unusual or atypical source in a particular style. For example, a student might want to cite meeting minutes and find that the style guide they are using doesn’t include an example of citing meeting minutes. Asking Gemini how to cite meeting minutes in MLA style produces an explanation of the basic format, examples of meeting minute citations in MLA style, and information about in-text citation and optional citation information.

Attribution

Current general practice is to be transparent about use of GAI, whether that includes an author’s note that explains the writing process, a writer’s reflective memo, or just a footnote that indicates the writer has used GAI as part of the process, and identifies which part of the process. Many major scholarly organizations that set guidelines for citation practices have issued or posted statements about how to document use of GAI.

  1. How to cite ChatGPT in APA from APA’s Style Blog
  2. AI Citation, Documentation of Sources from The Chicago Manual of Style Online’s Q&A Section [Note: IEEE Style is built from Chicago Style, so you can use this to guide the creation of IEEE citations too.]
  3. How do I cite generative AI in MLA style? from the MLA Style Center
Scenario

Professor Smith, a first-year college composition instructor, introduces her students to Generative AI (GAI) tools like ChatGPT to assist with writing assignments. She assigns a project: writing an argumentative essay on a contemporary issue, allowing the use of GAI.

Issues Arise:

  1. Bias: Some students notice that the AI-generated content sometimes reflects biases, leading to skewed perspectives in their essays.
  2. Privacy: Concerns emerge about the privacy of student data and the information they input into the GAI tools.
  3. Ethics/Authorship: Questions arise about the ethics of using GAI and who truly holds authorship of the AI-assisted essays.

Student Perspectives:

  • Anna feels the AI is a helpful tool but is concerned about the biases in the generated content.
  • David worries about the privacy of his data and whether his inputs are stored or used elsewhere.
  • Emily questions the ethics of using AI, wondering if the essays are truly her own work.

Professor's Concerns:

Professor Smith sees potential benefits in GAI but is worried about bias in the AI outputs, the privacy of student data, and the ethical implications regarding authorship.

Discussion Questions:

  1. Bias:
  • How can students identify and address biases in AI-generated content?
  • Should there be guidelines for using GAI to ensure balanced and fair perspectives?
  1. Privacy:
  • What are the potential privacy risks associated with using GAI tools?
  • How can students and educators protect their data when using these technologies?
  1. Ethics/Authorship:
  • Is it ethical to use GAI for writing assignments? Who holds authorship of AI-assisted work?
  • Should there be limits on how much GAI assistance is acceptable in academic work?

Collaborative Learning and Collaborative Writing

Collaborative Learning

Writing courses often involve collaboration. Writing is a social activity that involves communicating with others and, furthermore, talking with others can help writers refine their ideas and consider how others respond to their writing choices (CCCC; Giordano et al.; NCTE). Experienced writers often collaborate with others as part of the writing process by sharing ideas, reading and responding to one another’s drafts, asking for input from communities that are represented in the writing, sharing and publicizing their writing, or engaging with readers or responses to their writing. At a fundamental level, writing is a social practice: it is typically done in order to communicate with an audience, whether that audience is one person on the other end of a text message or many people reading a published work. Even writing a to-do list or a journal can be considered communication with your future self, and scholars of writing have pointed out that the ways we think internally are shaped by our social experiences (Bruffee).

Over the course of their education, many students learn to think about writing as something that they do for school and try to produce work that aligns with “what the teacher wants.” In a composition course like UN 1015 though—the one you are taking—the lessons, assignments, and course goals are all based on research about how to teach writing effectively and how students learn. The goals of this class are shaped by learning goals that the university has adopted, as well as research on education and writing. That research is not just about how writers write and how students learn; it also considers what knowledge and practice will be expected of you as a member of the communities you engage with and as a team member in your future workplace (Bruffee; NCTE). Much of the writing you encounter (including this textbook!) is designed and produced collaboratively. Therefore, in order to learn to write in ways that will help you beyond your time as a student, you will need to learn how to create, respond to, and revise writing in collaboration with others.

Even beyond writing itself, collaborative learning is what education experts call a high-impact practice. According to the American Association of Colleges and Universities, high-impact practices are teaching and learning approaches that are “based on evidence of significant educational benefits for students who participate in them” (aacu.org, “High-Impact Practices”). This robust evidence for the educational benefits of collaborative learning, such as building trust and goals for revision, is why “Foster Collaboration” is one of the essential abilities identified in Michigan Tech’s Essential Education goals and performance criteria (Michigan Tech University Senate).

Strategies for Writing Together

Collaboration can be helpful at almost any stage of the writing process. As you have seen from previous chapters and sections, collaborating with others can involve discussing the writing task, your topic ideas, your plans, and/or your writing process with others (such as classmates, your instructor, or a friend or family member). Writing centers typically invite students to speak with a tutor at any stage of the writing process, and many writing courses have collaboration built into class activities and assignments so students can benefit from collaboration.

This section will primarily discuss collaboration strategies for group projects, but a few of the sections include material that could be used for individual projects, too. (For the purposes of this section, individual projects will refer to those in which you receive feedback and/or grades as an individual, whereas group projects will refer to those in which your assignment receives feedback and/or grades as a group.)

Planning for Collaboration

For group projects, planning and communication are central to successful collaboration. Some groups may be able to achieve success without this kind of preparation, but relying on luck also opens your group up to the chance that group members will not see things the same way nor have the same expectations, which can lead to conflict or inequitable distribution of responsibilities. For example, some students prefer to have their work done early, whereas others find that they have trouble working without the pressure of an impending deadline. You are unlikely to change these kinds of habits and practices during the course of your project, so knowing these differences and planning ways of working with them is an important part of collaboration. We suggest that your group start off by building connections between group members and then have a thorough discussion of your expectations. These processes can help you find ways to work together even if all members of your group don’t have the same preferences or ways of working.

Introductions

Sometimes when students begin working together on a group project, they already know each other from other classes or from previous activities. However, it’s fairly common for students not to know the names of everyone else in class even if they’ve been seeing one another for a few weeks or even a few months. So, if you don’t remember the name of everyone in your group or don’t know much about one another, don’t be shy about suggesting a round of introductions before you start working together. This can help you remember one another’s names and learn more about one another’s skills and experiences.

Crafting an Elevator Pitch

One introduction activity that can help even for team members that know one another is to brainstorm the relevant skills and experiences you each bring to the project. The elevator pitch activity below can be used in two ways. If you will have input on your group members, the elevator pitch can help you understand which classmates you might want to work with. Or, if groups have already been assigned, the elevator pitch can be used to get to know one another and think about how to distribute work among different group members.

Instructions:

Goal: Create a 1–2 minute elevator pitch for your classmates to share your skills and interests.

An elevator pitch is a brief description of your skills, experience, and expertise that is often used in professional situations involving networking with colleagues or potential colleagues. Examples of situations in which elevator pitches are used include conferences and during job searches (e.g., at a career fair). Typically, an elevator pitch is something that you can bring into a conversation with a potential employer or colleague when they ask you about your experience or expertise. When people are starting their careers, they may write out and practice an elevator pitch (with mentors or friends as audience) that they then refine over time as they notice how people respond.

More information on elevator pitches can be found at the websites below:

Process: To prepare your Elevator Pitch:

  1. Brainstorm some of the skills and experience you have that will be useful for this project. What skills can you contribute to your team? You can list skills that are specific to your assignment, but you can also focus on general communication and project management skills. Examples of these might include:
    • Writing & research: generating ideas, researching a topic, summarizing sources, writing for specific audiences, writing particular genres, stages of the writing process (e.g., drafting, revising, editing)
    • Collaboration and interpersonal communication: showing up, coming prepared, sharing your perspective, listening to others, communicating diplomatically, resolving conflict, keeping the group on-time and/or on-task
    • Project management: creating a project plan, breaking a project into tasks, creating a schedule, monitoring progress, dividing work among team members, providing useful feedback
  2. Focus on 2 or 3 skills to tell your classmates about. As you think about which skills to focus on, you can prioritize the top 2–3 by thinking about what will be most useful for the project and/or what draws most on your strengths. If possible, provide a specific example or two that gives evidence for your skill(s) to illustrate how you know that these are strengths of yours.
  3. Based on your own elevator pitch, what do you think you're looking for from your teammates or your group? Focus on 2–3 things you're looking for in potential group members and make a note of them so you can listen for them as your classmates share their pitches.

Delivery: These can be delivered aloud in class, in group meetings, or by using online tools like Flip (video) or Padlet (multimodal) to share pitches asynchronously.

Team Contracts: Setting Yourselves Up for Success

At the outset of a collaborative writing project, you will need to work together to make sure that your topic and process are clear to the entire team. One of the most important factors in the success of collaborative writing projects is clarity of responsibilities and communication processes—that is, does everyone on the team know what their role is? Does everyone know what responsibilities have been assigned to them? How will team members share updates on their responsibilities or communicate about problems that arise?

One way to address these concerns and others is to discuss them at the beginning of your collaboration. In this discussion, you’re not just engaging in the invention of the ideas that you will write about, but also inventing the kind of team you will be. Your instructor may require you to create a plan or contract if you’re collaborating with others on a major project. However, even if it’s not required, it’s a good idea to discuss some of the basic expectations and plans you have of one another to ensure that your team works together smoothly.

If you’re collaborating for a smaller project or a brief activity, you might just informally discuss this: Who will take notes? Who will share with the whole class when you’re done?

For longer projects, a team contract is a great way to outline some of the important aspects of your collaboration for everyone’s clarity. There are many team contract templates available online that you can use as a starting place. If you are creating your own team contract from scratch, here are a few recommendations of things to include:

  1. Goals: What are your team’s goals? What do team members hope to accomplish by the end of the project?
  2. Expectations: What expectations do you have of yourself and your team for attendance and participation in meetings or in-class work time, communication about the project, division of responsibilities, decision-making, quality of work, and the project timeline?
    1. For example, what does “ideal” participation look like for different group members? How and how often do you expect team members to check in (e.g., via text, email, Canvas, in class, or other methods)? Do members of the team prefer to work ahead or will they need extra time?
    2. Keep in mind that people may have circumstances that affect their availability and participation: some students may be working full time, have family members to care for, or have a disability that affects the amount of time it takes them to complete a task. Make sure that your group discusses ways to make expectations accessible for everyone on the team. (For example, if someone misses a meeting because they’re sick, the group members who are present might be able to assign them a task that they can complete asynchronously, if the team member is feeling well enough to work.)
  3. Processes: What rules or processes will help your team meet these goals and expectations? How will you address conflict or problems that arise during your collaboration?
    1. Some of these rules or processes might be addressed in the expectations, but this set of questions can help you think about how you will proactively ensure that team members are communicating about the project, sharing progress, and addressing challenges. Some potential processes or rules to discuss might include: 
      1. Designating specific platforms for communication (e.g., email, Canvas, GroupMe)
      2. Having a shared work plan with tasks and due dates (this can be done in a simple Google Doc using “building blocks” or by using free online tools for project management such as Asana, Base Camp, or free gantt chart programs)
      3. Assigning certain roles to specific team members (within meetings: notetaking, meeting agendas, meeting invites, meeting moderator/facilitator; other roles might be project-specific) Depending on how your group has chosen to distribute the work, some roles might “rotate” (for example, the meeting notetaker and moderator could be different each time you meet).
      4. Designating meeting or check-in dates/times
      5. Discussing a process for dealing with challenges and/or conflict
        • For example, if someone in the group does not meet their goals on time, what should that person do? What should the rest of the group do?

        • As you think about this, try to reflect on your experiences with group work to provide you with some perspective on how things might go. We also advise that you try to imagine yourself on either side of the conflict. That is, instead of assuming that someone not meeting a goal is intentional, consider what kinds of extenuating circumstances might lead to that situation (e.g., family obligations, health issues, etc.).

  4. Signatures or Agreement: The goal of including a space for members of the team to sign their name is really more about ensuring that everyone has had a chance to read, discuss, and provide input on the contract. A team contract will be most effective if the entire team has had input on the contract and agrees to the content. Team members can show their agreement by signing in designated spaces or the contract can be shared in a forum that allows team members to comment with their approval or agreement.

In addition to your team contract, of course, you will probably also need to make some decisions about the topic and outcomes of your collaboration. However, working on the contract first can help you with these steps. For example, if you have decided on a decision-making process (e.g., Will you need consensus from all team members? How will you address disagreements?), this might make the discussion of topic and outcomes go more smoothly.

Tip: Different modes of communication might help you get a more well-rounded picture of group members’ perspectives. Some people might feel pressured to agree with the group in meetings but be more willing to share their honest opinions in writing, or vice versa. Having more than one way to communicate can help ensure that you hear everyone’s perspectives.

Invention

Group projects: Once you and your group have decided on some of the goals and processes that will guide your collaboration, it’s time to talk about the topic and direction for your project.

First, make sure that you and your team all understand the assignment. Even if you’ve discussed the assignment as a class, make sure that you carefully read the assignment description and make a note of key information and any questions that come up for you prior to discussing with your group. This is one way of preparing for the discussion with your team. You can then use your initial group discussion to talk about the assignment and check one another’s understanding.

Once you’ve discussed the assignment requirements and addressed any questions that have come up about the assignment goals and requirements, it’s time to think about your group’s approach to the assignment: what topic(s) could your group focus on? Who will the audience be? If there is flexibility in the genre(s) you create, what genres seem like a good fit with the topic(s) and audience(s) your group is considering?

Tip: Since different people think at different speeds, it may be helpful to provide group members with some time to think about potential topics before diving into a discussion. This is where invention activities such as brainstorming, freewriting, mind mapping, and preliminary research can be helpful. If your instructor hasn’t guided your whole class through an activity like this, you can use some of your group meeting time to have everyone think or research on their own for 5–10 minutes before discussing as a group. Or, you can assign everyone to spend a small amount of time (<20 minutes) on this kind of activity before your next meeting.

Organizing

Once your group has made decisions about the open portions of your assigned writing task such as topic, audience(s), and/or genre, you will have to organize your work in two different ways. First, you’ll need to think about how you will organize your collaborative work. You’ve done some groundwork for this organizing when you developed your team contract, but now that you have more specific ideas about your project, you’ll need to think about:

  1. Organizing your team by breaking the overall task into smaller pieces that can be assigned to specific team members and used to track progress on the assignment.
    1. Some people use mnemonic devices to help them identify the key components of goal setting and project tracking. For example, SMART goals are specific, measurable, achievable, realistic, and time-bound. An alternative framework, FAST goals, uses frequently-discussed, ambitious, specific, and transparent as tools for goal setting. Whether or not you find these devices useful, a key principle of both frameworks involves breaking a project into smaller tasks that can be clearly marked as complete. For example, “write the rhetorical analysis paper” is too broad a goal, but these smaller goals will help accomplish that broader goal:
      1. Gather materials for analysis
      2. Identify key features in the materials, paying particular attention to patterns or features that speak to the goals of your analysis
      3. Group the key features and patterns into a set of claims about the materials. If you’re not sure how to move from patterns and features to claims, begin by answering the questions, “what do these features/patterns say about the materials?” and “how do these features/patterns connect to the rhetorical situation?”
      4. Develop a thesis statement or argument based on those claims
      5. Create an outline based on the thesis statement and claims
      6. Sort evidence into sections or paragraphs based on the thesis and claims
      7. Explain how the evidence supports the claims and thesis statement
    2. Another important component of project management is regular communication. If group members are making progress and sharing updates regularly, team members are more likely to stay on track and identify challenges early on (which typically makes the challenges easier to address). You can achieve this with regular meetings, but you can also use brief progress reports to check in. Below is a simple set of questions that group members can use to share progress. These questions can be adapted to a wide variety of projects.
      1. What have you accomplished since our last meeting/check in?
      2. What challenges have you encountered and how did you address/work through them?
      3. What are your next steps?
  2. Organizing your ideas. In addition to organizing your work by creating tasks, due dates, and progress checks, you’ll also need to organize your ideas. Like many aspects of the writing process, organizing ideas is often a recursive activity that you will come back to and refine throughout the project. The ideas below work for individual or group projects.
    1. Before you begin drafting, organizing your ideas might occur through:
      1. Identifying key subtopics or areas of interest from your invention work that you use to guide your research or analysis
      2. Identifying a thesis statement or argument and then breaking that overall idea down into the different component parts needed to support it
      3. Grouping evidence into themes or categories using
        • A tool such as a mind-map or other visualization to illustrate how the ideas are related;
        • PowerPoint, Google Slides, or a similar program to sort ideas into slides that each represent different themes or sections of your paper; or
        • Using a table or spreadsheet to sort information into lists that help you see an overview of the evidence.
      4. Creating an outline based on your topic, goals, audience, evidence, and assignment requirements
    2. While you are drafting, there are also a few strategies for keeping ideas organized:
      1. If the projects calls for it, Keep your thesis statement or argument at the top of the page and review it regularly to make sure you’re staying on track (or to revise the statement if your ideas have changed in ways that still fit the assignment requirements).
      2. Use section headings to separate different parts of the paper by their main topic or role in supporting the thesis statement. Even if the final product will not have headings in it, using them while you write can help you keep things organized.
      3. Use a reverse outline to create an overview of the main ideas in your writing. This technique is especially useful if you think your draft has strayed from your plans or if you’re having trouble with the structure and organization of the material you’ve already written.
      4. Use the cut-and-paste technique to organize your ideas. This technique is especially helpful if the paragraph structure of your draft needs work: for example, if you are having trouble breaking the draft into paragraphs or the paragraphs don’t seem (to you or your readers) to each focus on one idea. Print your draft out, keeping the printout one-sided. Once your draft is printed, go through and cut up the draft into pieces, with each piece addressing a specific topic or idea. (So, if a paragraph includes 3 sentences that address different topics, you would cut out each sentence as a separate piece.) Once you’ve cut the draft into pieces, sort them in piles according to their topic. From there, sort the pieces onto new paper or into a notebook to see what it would look like to reorganize. Once you have a reorganization that works, you can glue or tape the pieces down and use this as a guide for reorganizing the draft.

Drafting

Collaborative drafting can happen in a few ways. Often, it’s useful to assign different parts of the drafting to different team members who will compose the first draft of their assigned material. Some teams are able to collaboratively draft sections or an entire paper together, but this can depend on the familiarity and comfort level of team members with one another and the task. Others might find it distracting to be working together on the same section of a document or be nervous about making changes to others’ words. In addition, many collaborative tools such as Google Docs or Microsoft Word 365 can handle some simultaneous editing, but a large number of people or edits happening simultaneously can cause problems.

If your group or one of the writers in your group is struggling with their writing, one method for working through the problem is to talk through your ideas out loud. The person who is having trouble writing should talk while others listen and/or take notes. The idea for this strategy is that sometimes people find it difficult to get their ideas out and also maintain the voice that they are trying to write in, so talking to someone might help get the ideas out. They can revise later to make the ideas fit the voice of their writing.

Revising

Once the first draft is complete, your team can review the draft to see if it fits the plans you’ve made and to identify the strengths and areas for improvement in the draft. If your team does decide to assign different sections of writing to different team members, there are a few specific things to keep in mind:

  • The first draft isn’t the only pass through the material. If more than one person is interested in a section, one person can write the first draft and a second person can do the first revision pass.
  • The sections may initially sound like they’re in different voices if they are written by different writers, so one of your tasks during the revision process will be to see how you can revise for consistency throughout the paper and develop transitions between sections.

As you read one another’s contributions and think about what changes to make, it’s a good idea to keep the assignment requirements in mind. If your instructor has provided a rubric or set of requirements, you can use that to help guide your feedback to one another and to prioritize the different types of feedback readers provide. As noted in the section on peer review, it’s important to focus on things like content, organization, and task requirements at the review and revision stage.

Some specific revision strategies related to organization are listed in the organizing section: reverse outlines and a cut-and-paste activity. Of course, you can also check your work against an outline if you made one. The two additional strategies are helpful for times when you’re having trouble seeing what the structure should look like or when you’re having trouble with paragraphs.

Don’t be afraid to cut! If writing is a process in which we develop our thoughts as we compose, then many writers are able to create more concise, effective sentences later in the writing process because their thinking has developed further. If it makes you nervous to cut written material, consider creating a separate document with the material you cut so you can go back to it later if you decide you need it.

Editing & Proofreading

Many students have learned editing strategies from their previous writing or writing feedback. Editing for things like repetition, formatting, adherence to citation style, and concision are pretty common forms of editing across many types of projects and writers.

When it comes to editing for things like punctuation, syntax, usage, and style (what many people think of as “grammar”), bear in mind that there are many different Englishes spoken and written within the U.S. and around the world, and with that comes many different ways to say things “correctly.” What’s familiar to you may not necessarily be the only “correct” way to say something. As you are reading others’ writing and thinking about what edits to suggest, ask yourself: do I understand what the writer means? If the answer is “yes,” then your suggested edit is probably more about how fitting the writer’s choices are for the context (or how familiar the choices are to you) than about what’s “correct,” since the purpose of language is to convey meaning.

Many writers have learned “rules” about how to write such as:

  • How many sentences should be in a paragraph (and sometimes even what should be in each of those sentences)
  • Whether it’s okay to end a sentence with a preposition or split an infinitive
  • Whether it’s acceptable to use first person (I, we, me, us) in academic writing

However, writing is more complex and contextual than rules like these suggest and effective writing can’t really be summarized by a simple set of rules. One can follow all of the “rules” set out in a style guide and still have writing that’s not achieving its purpose, and vice versa. Therefore, if you find yourself in a situation in which you are editing classmates’ writing, think about where your idea about what’s correct comes from. In addition, it’s often more helpful to point out patterns in the writing that stand out to you as a reader and to explain why they stand out to you rather than to frame the writer’s choices as incorrect. For example, explaining that you’ve been taught not to use first person pronouns in a lab report because it draws readers’ attention to the scientist and their subjectivity is more helpful than just telling someone not to use “I” in their lab report.

A common technique that people use at the editing and proofreading stage is to read the draft aloud. Even if you have no one to listen to you, reading aloud can sometimes help you to hear or notice things in the writing that you might want to change. If you do have a listener, they might also be able to point out things from their perspective.

Another strategy is to use a screen reader (many programs have them built in) to read your text aloud to you: 

Tools for Collaborative Writing and Research

Project Planning Tools

There are a variety of tools available online for managing collaborative projects. Some tools have free versions with limited features that may be enough to support your small group on a project. (The paid versions can also be dependent on the size of the team in some cases.)

One of the important decisions your group will need to make early on is about the tools you will use to collaborate. Sometimes it is tempting to try out a new platform to see how it works, but keep in mind that many tech experts know all too well that newer isn’t always better when it comes to technologies used for work. The best tools for collaboration are typically those that

  • everyone on the team has access to,
  • everyone on the team knows how to use (or can easily learn, especially for a short term class project), and
  • allow your team to accomplish the top-priority tasks.

A new platform with lots of bells and whistles may not be better than a tried and true platform like your word processing software if people need to learn to use it or pay to use it. In addition, if you want long term access to your work, keep in mind that some small or brand new tools don’t take off or get bought by larger companies and this can mean that you have to transfer data or risk losing it. A final consideration that may be more or less relevant depending on the tool is intellectual property and control of data: some platforms require users to allow the platform use of their data in order to create an account or use the tool.

Project Collaboration Hubs

Since businesses and organizations often need to work collaboratively, there are many tools available for organizing team projects. These tools often have task and timeline tracking features but may also include many other tools such as messaging, file sharing, and more.

Shared Documents and Drives

Since everyone on our campus has access to Google features such as Google Drive, creating a shared drive is an accessible entry point for sharing materials in your group. This allows your team to share

  • meeting agendas and notes,
  • project tasks and to-do lists,
  • files (such as PDFs of sources), and
  • working documents (such as a shared draft or even separate documents for different sections).

In addition, many of the platforms allow commenting and chatting, which can be helpful for asking questions or getting feedback asynchronously (i.e., between meetings).

If you aren’t already familiar with some of Google’s project management tools, you can search Google Help (support.google.com) or the web for information on Google Docs “smart chips” and “building blocks,” which allow you to create things like dropdown menus to show a task status.

Scheduling and Task Tracking

If your group has a complex task, you can check project management tools to see if there is a free trial or free version with limited features that your group can use. However, some old school project management tools, such as gantt charts, can be created in a variety of ways depending on the tools you have access to.

Gantt charts are plans or maps of project tasks and timelines. Typically they list tasks in a left-hand column (on the vertical axis) and time on the top of the sheet (the horizontal axis). This allows team members to map out tasks according to how long they are expected to take and whether they are dependent on previous tasks, providing a visual overview of a project schedule that can be scaled up or down in specificity. Project management platforms like Asana or Monday advertise gantt chart capabilities, but you can also use a tool like a spreadsheet (in Google Sheets or Excel) to make one, and both Microsoft and Google have online tutorials showing how to create them.

If the project is less complex and time intensive, your group may prefer to use a simple list of checkboxes, a table, or calendar items to identify tasks and due dates. Many of these features are available in Google Docs, Google Calendar, and/or Google Keep (which has a sharing feature).

For visualization activities such as mind mapping or structure mapping, there are free online mind mapping tools such as Miro, but you can also use the tools in Google Slides or Powerpoint, Google Draw, or even map out ideas on paper and upload a scan or photo of the paper to your shared drive. The need for a dedicated tool might depend on how complex the map is, since mapping tools make it a little easier to create links and relationships between ideas.

Citation and Source Managers

Another type of useful tool for writing and collaborating is a citation management tool. Zotero is a popular example of such a tool that your team can use to save relevant sources (including academic sources, news articles, websites, social media posts, and more). Zotero is free and open source. Zotero browser extensions can be used to pull metadata from websites and automatically create entries in a library. Zotero “groups” allow you to create group citation libraries that are hosted on the web for sharing with a team. The free version allows you to share with as many people as you want, but the free storage is limited to 300 MB.

One of the particularly useful features of a citation management system, in addition to storing and sharing sources, is that these systems can be integrated into word processing software to create in-text citations and automatically populate the reference list with the sources cited in the text. This is especially useful for longer projects or those with a lot of sources. The citation manager can help you keep track of which sources are still in the paper after revising, for example, instead of having to manually check the in-text citations and the references page. As with any citation generator, it’s still a good idea to double check the in-text citations and reference list to make sure that the entries are formatted correctly.

Negotiating Conflict

There are many benefits to working in groups, including

  • practicing teamwork and collaboration skills that will most likely be a part of your career and personal life in one form or another;
  • benefiting from the skills, experience, and expertise of multiple people;
  • distributing the project labor across multiple people; and
  • having consistent input and feedback from multiple team members.

However, collaborative work can also involve conflict. Sometimes conflict comes up because people have different styles of working, personalities, and/or ways of seeing the world that are hard to align with one another. Other times, though, conflict can come about due to misunderstanding, miscommunication, and ineffective strategies for dealing with these issues (“Managing Conflict”). If your group or a few of its members find yourselves dealing with conflict in your team, the tips below may help you to manage the situation effectively.

Address the conflict or problem as soon as possible, as long as people are calm enough to speak to one another respectfully and to listen to one another. Waiting can sometimes make things worse or reduce the number of available options for resolving the conflict (“Managing Conflict”).

If needed, take a pause for people to calm down and collect their thoughts (Reynolds). This could be a five-minute pause during a group meeting or a longer pause, such as meeting later in the day or the next day. It’s important to have a plan for when the discussion will resume.

When discussing the problem, try to focus on the process and the project rather than other people (Reynolds). That is, framing the problem in relation to another person on your team (“you did X”), can escalate the situation because that person may feel judged or blamed, which might lead them to respond defensively or to shut down rather than staying in the conversation until the conflict is resolved.

If members of your team are having trouble focusing on the process and the project, you may want to try out a conflict management tool called “I statements.” An “I statement” is a common technique in conflict management that focuses on how the situation is affecting each person involved (i.e., how it makes the person feel or how it affects their ability to contribute to the project). In conflict management, this technique is used to help people on different sides of the conflict listen to one another’s perspective.

  • One format for constructing an “I statement” is:
    • “I feel… (state your emotion)
    • when… (describe the specific situation in a neutral and objective way)
    • because… (state the effect on your life)
    • and I want… (state the action you want taken)."

"It is very important to begin I statements by stating the emotion you have about the situation, rather than a thought or action” (Conflict Management at Iowa).

"If using this technique, it’s important for everyone involved to have a chance to explain their perspective (“I Statements” (Montemurro).

Engage in active listening. Sometimes, part of a conflict involves people not being heard or feeling invalidated. Therefore, an important part of navigating conflict is to ensure that different people involved are hearing one another and acknowledging one another’s perspectives. This is true even if the different people do not agree: it’s possible to hear and acknowledge someone else’s perspective even if yours is different. One method for hearing and acknowledging one another is to listen actively (“10 Tips for Active Listening”; “What Is Active Listening?”). Some techniques for active listening include:

  • Pay attention to the other person while they are speaking and do your best to listen, using techniques like eye contact, nodding, open body language, and/or brief verbal encouragement (such as “uh huh” and “yes”) to show that you hear or understand what the person is saying. (As a speaker, though, please bear in mind that these techniques are easier for some people than others; if someone doesn’t make eye contact that doesn’t necessarily mean they aren’t listening.)
  • Check and illustrate your understanding by paraphrasing, summarizing, and reflecting on what the other person is saying. For example, “What I’m hearing is . . .” or “It sounds like . . . .” can help you check your understanding. In addition, asking questions for clarification, such as “what do you mean when you say _____?” or “I’m not sure if I understood what you were saying about ______” can also serve a similar purpose. In addition to ensuring that you understand what the other person is saying, these techniques also serve the dual purpose of showing the other person that you’re listening and hearing them rather than just waiting for your turn to provide a rebuttal.
  • Allow the other person time to think about their response. In order to truly listen well, the people involved may need time to reflect on what the other person said and think about their response. Some people find silence uncomfortable, but allowing one another time to think and reflect is an important part of listening rather than planning your response to the other person in your mind.
  • Things to avoid include
    • interrupting the speaker,
    • planning counterarguments in your mind while the other person is speaking, and
    • looking at your phone or paying attention to other things going on around you rather than the conversation (“10 Tips for Active Listening”; “What Is Active Listening?”).
      (Tip: sometimes our responses to conflict are shaped by previous experiences or other things that we can’t completely control. If you find that you have trouble listening and making eye contact at the same time, for example, it’s probably okay to tell the other person that you are doing your best to listen but it helps you to, say, close your eyes or doodle in your notebook while listening.) Remind one another of the common goal of your team/group and try to focus the problem-solving process on reaching that goal.

Summarize and reflect on the conversation by acknowledging points of agreement, as these are often the foundation of a plan to move forward. Of course, you should also acknowledge points of disagreement; otherwise the people involved may not feel heard or understood. The points of agreement or alignment can be a starting point for moving forward as a team (Reynolds).

Create a plan to resolve the problem and follow through on the plan (“Managing Conflict”; Reynolds).

If your group is having trouble working through the conflict on your own, you may also seek out guidance from your instructor. However, instructors will often want to discuss things with all parties involved, so having discussed the issue within your group is a good first step before taking things to your instructor.